Jonus63
06-15-2008, 02:28 PM
This time,i will make up my own story. im not so great with coming up with names. just a warning XD.
Chapter 1. Prolouge
The year was 2012 and the location was New York city. The city was full of traffic as usual. It was a normal day, like anyother day. The Parkinson Couple was going to have a baby. Joseph Parkinson worked on C.S.I and was on a mission in South Africa. The wife, Maria Parkinson and her maiden,Tina Nischers was in a hurry to the hospital. Maria called the ambulance to take them to the hospital. Tina and a ambulance worker carried Maria in the ambulance and out her on a bed.
-Everything is going to be fine, Tina said
The hospital was near the Parkinson house. The ambulance drove fast to the Hospital
-Hurry!
Two Ambulance workers carried Maria into the hospital with the stretcher. Tina followed under the whole process.
-Push!
A baby scream heard.
-Its a boy, Congratulations, the ambulance worker said.
-What should we name him? Tina asked.
-well...what about Nathan? Maria said quietly.
-What a great name! the ambulance worker said.
Now let's leave this beautiful scene and go to another one in washington DC in the White House.
Kevin Smithy. The president. Is reading the morning paper.
The butler came in.
-Ahh good morning Fredrick!
-Good morning to you sir. Fredrick said coldly.
Im sorry, I have bad news.
-Lets hear them shall we?
-We have a UFO in sight sir.
-What?! we need to look it up.
-Ill go start the car.
The UFO was there. A black spot in the sky.
-Hurry Fredrick! The car drove in a Flying Start. In almost 150 kilometres per hour the car made it to the place.
-Do we have the guns ready?
-yes sir as you said.
The UFO landed in the place. Out came 2 creatures. They almost looked like us, a bad imitation of us. They had 2 and a half eyes, 3 feet, 3 arms. the only thing that was right, was the heart. It pumped normally. But a little too loud.
-Greetings, My name is Captain Patchalor.
-Hello, said Kevin
-We want to give you an opportunity.
-Lets go inside our conference room.
Later..
-So what your saying? is that u want to give us a machine...that can decide what we should do with our lives?
-yes
-well..dont you think that we humans can decide for our selves?
-no, It will only lead to disaster. Believe me.
-Can we see the machine?
-Yes.
A tiny machine was carried into the room. It opened, and a computer voice said:
-Hello, I am D.E.S.T.I.N.Y.
D. Deciding
E. Earth
S. Schedule
from
T. The
I. Intergalactic
N. New
Y. Yorkio.
(here i take pause again.)
Chapter 1. Prolouge
The year was 2012 and the location was New York city. The city was full of traffic as usual. It was a normal day, like anyother day. The Parkinson Couple was going to have a baby. Joseph Parkinson worked on C.S.I and was on a mission in South Africa. The wife, Maria Parkinson and her maiden,Tina Nischers was in a hurry to the hospital. Maria called the ambulance to take them to the hospital. Tina and a ambulance worker carried Maria in the ambulance and out her on a bed.
-Everything is going to be fine, Tina said
The hospital was near the Parkinson house. The ambulance drove fast to the Hospital
-Hurry!
Two Ambulance workers carried Maria into the hospital with the stretcher. Tina followed under the whole process.
-Push!
A baby scream heard.
-Its a boy, Congratulations, the ambulance worker said.
-What should we name him? Tina asked.
-well...what about Nathan? Maria said quietly.
-What a great name! the ambulance worker said.
Now let's leave this beautiful scene and go to another one in washington DC in the White House.
Kevin Smithy. The president. Is reading the morning paper.
The butler came in.
-Ahh good morning Fredrick!
-Good morning to you sir. Fredrick said coldly.
Im sorry, I have bad news.
-Lets hear them shall we?
-We have a UFO in sight sir.
-What?! we need to look it up.
-Ill go start the car.
The UFO was there. A black spot in the sky.
-Hurry Fredrick! The car drove in a Flying Start. In almost 150 kilometres per hour the car made it to the place.
-Do we have the guns ready?
-yes sir as you said.
The UFO landed in the place. Out came 2 creatures. They almost looked like us, a bad imitation of us. They had 2 and a half eyes, 3 feet, 3 arms. the only thing that was right, was the heart. It pumped normally. But a little too loud.
-Greetings, My name is Captain Patchalor.
-Hello, said Kevin
-We want to give you an opportunity.
-Lets go inside our conference room.
Later..
-So what your saying? is that u want to give us a machine...that can decide what we should do with our lives?
-yes
-well..dont you think that we humans can decide for our selves?
-no, It will only lead to disaster. Believe me.
-Can we see the machine?
-Yes.
A tiny machine was carried into the room. It opened, and a computer voice said:
-Hello, I am D.E.S.T.I.N.Y.
D. Deciding
E. Earth
S. Schedule
from
T. The
I. Intergalactic
N. New
Y. Yorkio.
(here i take pause again.)