The Stalker

[Okami]

Well, basically, it's mine and LD's first Machinima, (Using SSBB, of course) and the first Machinima of Clawsome Productions.

YES. YES. WE FINISHED THE FREAKING EDITING (And for the record, editing's a real bit--) AND I'M REALLY PSYCHED.

Well, it's sort of like a Shipp or MALR short. Look 'em up for those who don't know what that means. But basically, a short toon that doesn't have or require voice acting. That's all I can tell at the moment.

It's finished thanks to our new way of recording, (I'll post another BLOG entry about that later) but not uploaded. It's being sent over to my crappy computer so I can upload it as we speak. I'll update on this later...

OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOD! The file freaking failed to get sent over by lag or something and now we have to start ALL OVER.

By start all over, I don't mean the whole thing, just the sending...

YES! IT'S FINISHED!

It's being uploaded to Machinima and YouTube, in case you didn't know.

Anyway, it looks good to me, and it's our first, so it's not going to be the best, or anything. Give us feedback-- it'll help us for our future videos.

I will commence uploading now...

[DrkKnight]

o thanks for tellin me @hole

[Okami]

Urgh, I don't know what's wrong with the uploaders on Machinima and YouTube, but on YouTube it says it's 100% done yet it doesn't give me a confirmation thingy. On Machinima, I just clicked submit and it's telling me to wait for a confirmation screen... I dunno what the crap is wrong.

[DrkKnight]

thats strange, want me to try uploading?

[Okami]

Well, the video's up on YouTube. It says it's uploaded on Machinima, but I can't find it anywhere.

Check it out here:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B-5R3Uvpa0o

And watch it in high quality! It looks so much better that way.

Remember, it's our first attempt-- so give us feedback.

[DrkKnight]

HAHAHAA that was good kami, i didnt like the usage from mega video when u coulda got the audio and used your own link which would have work better, editing = amazing and the screen transformation were sick very clawsome

[SIR SPILZ A LOT]

lmao that was good okami

[Okami]

Thanks Drk! And I didn't take the part from mega because I was too lazy to do it myself, I did it as a homage to mega.

Anyway, any other thoughts about it? What did you like? What didn't you like?

Thanks Spillz!

[DrkKnight]

hmmm i might have suggested a little better camera work still good though, maybe a few more camera changes like from ganon to zelda

[Okami]

How was the idea? The concept? The transitions?

We were actually going to do something like that, but it was waaaaay too hard to edit. I knew we could've done a little better on the camera work, but it's our first snap at it, so, eh. I thought it was pretty good for a first Machinima.

Also, if you liked this, don't forget to SUBSCRIBE for more Clawsome stuff!

[DrkKnight]

yes very, concept, very original idea, i liked it, transitions, godly but the one in the middle was a little out of place maybe jus a fade to black would have worked and have thats transition at the beggining, overall based on others id say 8.6/10

[Okami]

Yeah, I was worried about the one in the middle. Thought it was a little exaggerated. I'm still overall happy with the way it turned out.

Thanks for being honest about everything. :D Yay 8.6! That's good for a first!

Anyway, I'm hoping our next one will be even better. With school and all and my lack of equipment, it may take a while, but I hope the wait will be worth it!

[Legendary Dragoon]

you think i should take that part out? the project is saved on the computer still so i can remove the transition and export it again.

Okami, sounds like our first attempt was a success.

[Okami]

Nah, it's all fine and good.

Seems like it! :D Hopefully our second's going to top this one!

[Legendary Dragoon]

yup and if i can figure this other stuff out, we can get more out of brawl.

[Okami]

UPDATE! Video now on Machinima!

http://www.machinima.com/film/view&id=30244