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is0m4n
10-24-2008, 10:43 PM
yes a fan fiction
as in a very looooooooooooooooooong story
on brawl
the story will be very sexual so its 18+
very graphic sex and mature themes. it will be posted bit by bit and become a beautiful thing
you guys may contribute if you want
here we go
i thought about it...
i am gonna tell it through a narrators eyes...
he will see things and meet people in the brawl universe

Chapter One: A Brawlers Dream.



It was one very late Saturday night. I was just about to fall asleep but kept playing my brand new copy of Super Smash Brothers Brawl on my Wii. I found the online play to be fun... maybe too fun. I glanced at the clock, and it was, 6am!!? What the hell? I played all night. I went to go get some milk from the fridge. I brought it to my room. I could barley stay awake, and spilled the damn milk all over the carpet. I began to clean up the milk, and saw something out my eye. Looked like a doll. Kinda like the ones in Super Smash Brothers. Looked like Sheik. I just put it on the shelf, next to the Wii and let it go. I was kinda peeved that I wasn't able to drink my milk. So I fired up Brawl just to have a few anonymous games. I then saw the Sheik Doll. There had to be some explanation, it suddenly began to shake...
it came to life.
"What... WhaWhaWhaWhat do yyyoyou want?" I asked in the best way I could, sadly.
"Come with me..." Sheik coldly replied.
She pulled at my chest, and like the very Earth was dropping on my body, I felt massive pressure. I was suddenly bought into this world. A world unlike any other.
"Where are we?" I had to ask.
"Subspace." Sheik once again replied with her icy voice.
NO. It couldn't be! I must've been dreaming!
I slit my wrist to see if it bled... if it didn't, I was dreaming.





It bled.

ECLIPSE
10-24-2008, 10:45 PM
im sorry for the spam but
laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaame

Bizzy
10-24-2008, 10:47 PM
wow u took my story. hope you do well

Okami
10-24-2008, 10:48 PM
Hrm.. could you give any plot details?

Also, shouldn't this go in the fanfiction section?

"Bizz,Spilz,Drk,Mia,Ark,Iso,mar,Milan,Zman,Joker,Ca sh,Chevy,Gus,Tearz, The tru ppl of the world fight for freedom,love,life i wont give up till I see dis world change
i stand with my freinds"

I'm not a true people of this world? D:

is0m4n
10-24-2008, 10:48 PM
not really biz...
i am doin a brawl fanfiction
you did a BC one remember?

is0m4n
10-24-2008, 10:51 PM
Hrm.. could you give any plot details?

Also, shouldn't this go in the fanfiction section?

"Bizz,Spilz,Drk,Mia,Ark,Iso,mar,Milan,Zman,Joker,Ca sh,Chevy,Gus,Tearz, The tru ppl of the world fight for freedom,love,life i wont give up till I see dis world change
i stand with my freinds"

I'm not a true people of this world? D:
well im having two ideas
1: we revolve around what happens before the fighting and during the war
2:just a random plotline in which love, hate,hope and strength arise in many different places

SIR SPILZ A LOT
10-24-2008, 10:51 PM
lmao well im in lmao o yea bizz when u gona finish the story? :rofl: and how many times will i die in this one i wonder hhhhhhhhmmmmmm lmao

ECLIPSE
10-24-2008, 10:52 PM
nice sig okami

is0m4n
10-24-2008, 10:54 PM
if you mean my story spilz...
your not in it
its a brawl fanfiction...
im gonna write the first chapter now

SIR SPILZ A LOT
10-24-2008, 10:56 PM
aight well w\e lmao and y u in invisible mode is0 we all know ur here :rofl:

is0m4n
10-24-2008, 10:58 PM
lol idk...

SIR SPILZ A LOT
10-24-2008, 11:00 PM
lmao ok then w\e lol

lol i need 2 resurrect the crazy poll

is0m4n
10-24-2008, 11:20 PM
Okay!
chapter one is up!
a little short, but enjoyable.
tell me how i did. im new @ this

is0m4n
10-24-2008, 11:27 PM
oh yea and any global mods or sk...
can you move this in to fanfiction? thanks

Zman
10-25-2008, 03:17 PM
cooooooooool.................totally bitchin!!!!!!!!!! yeah

Radian
10-26-2008, 01:02 AM
consider it moved :)

is0m4n
10-26-2008, 01:24 AM
yay
*demands oral sex and gets arrested*

Okami
10-26-2008, 10:04 AM
Um, where IS the first chapter?

is0m4n
10-26-2008, 02:13 PM
on the original post...
the 1st story chapter is on the original post...

Okami
10-26-2008, 08:10 PM
Good for a starter, but it seemed a bit like a summary rather than a story itself. And a bit short to call a "chapter" even though you already stated that.

Basically, my only criticism is that it was too short.

Overall it seems like an interesting story, looking forward to future chapters.

is0m4n
10-26-2008, 08:21 PM
thanks
im gonna add more length to future chapters
ill probably do another chapter next weekend

Zman
10-29-2008, 09:41 PM
sounds awesome. lol, you should get sk to put a mod in to where you have to pay smash cash to read it lol

Okami
10-29-2008, 11:04 PM
That would be... going a bit far. If it's even possible in the first place.

is0m4n
10-30-2008, 11:14 PM
lol zman im pretty sure tht isnt possible
and we use credits now

Zman
11-01-2008, 04:22 PM
thats what i meant :p...................and ofcourse its possible, it would just take like a whole nother section and a lot of money lol

is0m4n
11-01-2008, 06:35 PM
but im a noob writer lol

Zman
11-01-2008, 06:39 PM
oh well, all it takes is .......................imagination!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!! lol and okami im not pissed at you......im only pissed at you in that one thread lmao. which im not even pissed at you there anymore either................go figure

is0m4n
11-02-2008, 09:36 AM
im not going to be able to add another chapter this weekend =[
but i will next weekend:)

Zman
11-03-2008, 04:26 PM
NOOOOOOOOOO! oh well, im just glad your taking time out of your day to write this thing, and for that...........................i thank you.